My favorite of all your work is "I'm Afraid of Clowns", so when I heard the tone of this I got a bit excited. That said it doesn't really compare to your other work. It will make a pretty good ringtone though.
To be honest ( which I usually am anyway), I think it woul've worked better as an Indie song continueing the calmer part of the song with some lyrics added in and then, I probably woulda'
favorited this song.
I really like it, but
i seriosly believe that you are in the wrong genre.
If you actually don't have a friend that is a poet or atleast a Newgrounds buddy that is good at writing lyrics. then write it yourself, I would like to feel more from this excellant track, nd I think some actual vocals would improve this t an infinaniete degreee.
Well, I guess you do have a Secret of Mana influence.
I must say that it is quite beautiful, and as I mentioned in annother reveiw I can feel a lump in my chest from the memories it brings up.
I was waiting for you to find this. lol. Glad you liked both of my songs! I have quite a few "Secret of Mana" songs on here. So check them out!
Well, I'd say you accomplished your goal of making it relaxing.
My only complaint really is that it's just a little loop.
That said, I definately enjoyed this. It's just the kinda thing I like.
It soundscheery and melancholy, at the same time, though that might be because it reminds me of the music in Secret of Mana.
Secret of Mana always makes me feel kinda sad.
yeah. I actually wrote this a few hours after I finished "A Wish of Winter" which is a re-iteration of "A Wish" from Secret of mana. I wasn't trying to implement anything in relation to Secret of Mana in it though...
Nice work, I definately feel the obvious nostalgia, but it also makes me envision hanging out with a couple buddies on the porch in the evening, maybe sippin' on a couple beers. I'd definately like to hear the other "parts" you have in mind.
I really like the music, howevver, you used too much effect and didn't sing confidently enough for me to accurately judge your voice. I actually thought you were trolling with a Vocaloid at first.
Sing a bit louder, because in ths song you sound like the only sober guy at a party who's being brought into the drunken singing. Like I said the music in itself was pretty good, and it has earned my interest. Write a new song, or just sing this one again (but louder) and upload it, so we here at Newgrounds can actually take a listen at that voice o' your's.
I really love the Dark Ambient style, there really isn't enough of it, but your work is almost enough to sate my appetite for it. Nothing relaxes me more than the dreary, hopeless, sound of songs like these.
That's interesting of you to say. Some people have told me that they didn't think this was dark at all! Of, course, to me, this is more of a song about melancholy, and that whole 'How could I have been such a fool?' feeling.
Here's a suggestion for you, though. If you are looking for Dark Ambient music on Newgrounds, search through VegetarianMeat's old collection. He has a few good ones.
Thanks for reviewing!
I actually really like this, however you and the guy below me are right. It's not really grunge. I think it would fit really well into a game though, what with the whole old school game sounding guitar and all. Like a space level or a cursed cave, hell maybe even something like an underwater Donkey Kong Country like level.
(side note: The useful/ useless review buttons aren't like/ dislike buttons, it's really a how much advice is givin scale. Just because people give you a bad score or didn't like it doesn't make it useless,in fact criticism is often a better way to learn or inspire you to do better.)
....and I'm here again.
Well, I must say that this is actually one of my favorite songs.
( not just from Newgrounds)
I somehow end up listening to it everyday.
I do hope you still log in every once in awhile, because I have all your songs downloaded and blast'em on my xbox regularly, much to the dismay of my roomate, and I could totally use even more.
Wow, I'm very pleased to hear that! I have more music on faggotsapiens.bandcamp.com in case you haven't checked it out yet! I have a ton of unreleased music but I'm kind of still waiting to come up with better stuff, some kind of concept for the next album and what the overall sound will be like on it... I've been busy with my bands lately but my solo project is still going strong.
If this really is one of your favorite songs you're going to need a better version of this. I will re-record this one in better quality as soon as I can!
I feel like wandering around a suburban neighborhood at night ,and its incredibly windy.
Yeah, that's pretty much what I was going for.
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